The last poem as a part of my writing 101, poetry course.
My take on the topic today is as a caterpillar, who came in with a soul ready to transform by the pupa of this course that has helped me grow my skills into a beautiful butterfly, ready to reach out to a new world.
The last farewell
New to a world
Never seen before
Creeping and crawling
In shadows unexplored
I was the caterpillar
Yet to fly
Ugly, immature,
Just beginning to try
Slithering for months
Till I found my cocoon
Suddenly all wrapped up
Life changed too soon
A pupa, they said
Had I become
Ready to transform
My childlike pun
Into an art
So live and profound
Reaching out to ears
With a silent sound
And within two weeks
The pupa wore off
Shedding the trepidation
Of existence, unbound
As a life unfolded
Out of gloom
I was the butterfly,
Set to bloom
Bidding my final bye
To the pupa that helped me so
Imparting me wings
My heart, ready to soar
Now it’s hard to say
I’ll never meet you again
But if I do
I hope time won’t end………….so soon!!
Nice one😃👌
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Thanks
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Most welcome.
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You are a poet. Good one. I enjoyed it.
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With every new poem, I try my best to get the tag of being a “true poet”, though I know there’s a long way to go.
Thank u so much 😊 Your words mean a lot.
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You are welcome. Keep it up.
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nicely written 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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This is beautiful poetry! A great piece to end the course!
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Thank you so much
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You are welcome!
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Very nicely written.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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Very vivid and apt analogy!
I love these lines:
“Shedding the trepidation
Of existence, unbound
As a life unfolded
Out of gloom
I was the butterfly,
Set to bloom”
Well-done, Sparsh!
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Thank you so much. Your appreciation means a lot. 🙂
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You’re welcome, and it’s my pleasure! 🙂 Hope to see you around!
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See you around too. 🙂
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